Thank you all for the great creative feedback! I have made the amendments and I think that it looks much better; what do you all think?
Sunday, 20 April 2008
Amended Design
Thank you all for the great creative feedback! I have made the amendments and I think that it looks much better; what do you all think?
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Hi Shaun,
Much better, the alignment of your letters gives your logo better presence and is more aesthetically pleasing.
Great work!
I think the M looks much better.
still the i & t look awkward to me.
Dont know what to suggest though.
Hi
Its looking a lot better now, although i can see what Gary means about the i also. I think the solution is lining the top on the i before the dot up with the e.
Thanks, Martyn
Hi Everyone,
Great feedback once again, thank you.
I can see what you mean about the 'i' and the 't' however, I have tried various solutions to this, including the one already suggested by Martyn, capital letters, the removal of the dot on the 'i' and nothing seams to be working.
I think that the feeling of 'unease ' that some of you have mentioned is only slight and my have to be something that I am going to have to accept at this stage of development.
Thank you all very much and I look forward to repaying the favour.
The logo looks fine now I think, but I don't think it's the right feel for the kind of audience you are meant to be appealing to. It looks too much like a hospital logo, and the rounded edges give it an overly soft feel.
I think it needs more of an edge to it, and it needs to look meaner. Right now, it looks too friendly.
Great stuff Shaun, the only thing I'd suggest is to try with different colour schemes.
The design of the 'M' better suits your goal, and it better suits the emit project.
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